Chapter 1 is officially fleshed out. 7 scenes! It was a little rough figuring everything all out. I know that it needs more, so much more but the setup is ready for first edits. God I’m not looking forward to that. I’m finding Marianna to be less bitchy than she needs to be. Something I will have to tweak. Can’t have my protagonist start off in the wrong direction now can I?
Don’t like the title. Changed to Only A Dream but not sure I like that much either..