Yeah so I’ve been thinking that I hate the third person pov for the dream chapters. It feels wrong. So I am going to do all the dream chapters in first person from now on and then go back and re-do the first dream. Also I’ve been thinking that maybe the format of reality then dream for each chapter isn’t as necessary….that one I’m not fully sure on that though. It’s an easy change later to break down the reality chapters into more than one if I want.
I started chapter 4 in third and now I’ve restarted it in first. I can tell a difference already, it feels way better. Only trouble I’m having is the damn tense, I flip flop which is annoying but I can adjust that later.
On another note, Merry Christmas.